Niran | 06.12.2018
Wow. Your acting is incredible. The raw honesty of your delivery and the vulnerability of your character. I can't believe how natural that sensed. Like others have said, this could be an indie film, or a cool hookup stage have fun. You even did the 3 act format the character setup, the conflict (loving her bro), and the resolution. Amazing. Hilarious. Emotionally, and physically satisfying. You've possibly hit upon a fresh genre. It even included some guitar vocals.